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I feel his hand over my throat,
His cold and bony fingers.
He’s finally got his grip on me,
Still my struggling lingers.

I stare into the blank black eyes,
I suddenly grow calm.
He’s here to help me from my pain,
This is what I wanted all along.

He releases my soul from within me,
And holds me to his chest,
He carries me across the sky,
My spirit finally at rest.

Death’s lovely angel,
Has rescued me from pain,
I was taken away from it all,
with nothing left to remain.
Not Free To Use.

Basically, this is about someone who is about to die, beginning to fight with the death angel, but then gives up and realizes that death is what he really wanted. Kinda.
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XdarkXnXdeadlyX Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very emotional,  know how that feels and many others do too. great work!
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much :)
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XdarkXnXdeadlyX Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
no problem
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh the bitter beauty, oh the sweet sorrow
No more struggle, let his pale wings embrace
And featherduster the embers of your pain
To melt the frozen tear tracks off your face. :rose:
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
Love it!
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha I'm honoured you do. It's my mediocre response to your beautiful poem. :)
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Writer
Well thank you for it. Clap 
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome. :)
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ShiroIri Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very interesting.
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :3
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