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They dress me up in scarlet red,
and pretend to shed a tear.
They lay me in my satin bed,
but they knew this day was near.

They knew this day was coming,
But yet they didn’t care.
Now they act so loving,
and say it isn’t fair.

They shower me with roses,
shades of black and red,
but really no one opposes,
me lying in my satin bed.

Now they come  to visit,
although it’s very rare,
They act like they loved me,
even though they didn’t care.

Not free to use.
The one in this poem is talking about how shes already dead and her family acting liked they cared and they love her.
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IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel that this has the makings of a classic! :wow:
It just grabs your attention, its beat has a pleasing feel to it and sticks in your head even after you've read it, and it makes you think about it.
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you!
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BlackGoddess13 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
This reminds me of something in my own life. It is beautiful.
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry if this poem is based on, or similar to, actual events that has happened in your life. All I can say is you can't go against one's nature. All families love their members, but sometimes their nature makes their affection seem otherwise. Sometimes their affection may be misinterpreted as something entirely different.
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Writer
It is to be honest. And I really do hope you are right.
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I had more to offer than my sympathy.
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Writer
Its alright lol. Thanks for reading!
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime. :D
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