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She really doesn’t understand,
How you treat her the way you do.
She loved you more than anything,
She thought you loved her too.

She dies a little more each time
She sees you out with her.
She cries herself to sleep at night,
Then dreams that you love her.

You used to tell her she was pretty,
And how you loved her more each day,
Now she’d give anything,
Just to have you there to stay.

You don’t see that she misses you,
Each night the pain gets stronger,
And when she finally talks to you,
She wants it to be longer.

She doesn’t really understand
why she loves you so.
You were her one and only,
She had to watch you just up and go.

She really doesn’t understand,
How you treat her the way you do,
She loved you more than anything,
She thought you loved her too.
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IAmDefective Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014   General Artist
I am truly sorry for the hearts I've broken.
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Simply beautiful and amazing!!! :la:
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Writer
thank you!
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :)
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rainbowpuzzleribbon Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice!
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you
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Mimi-Chanchu Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This was very very good I love the way you put it :)
Now if I could only find my feels...
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much
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Mimi-Chanchu Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Of course :3
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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Professional General Artist
amazing....love it so so much ":)))
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Professional General Artist
you are so great in poems...welcome !:)))))
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Cocoru Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You pretty much put my thoughts into beautiful poetry....well done, beautiful piece.
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much, really means a lot
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Cocoru Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!
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blackheart1d Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
A nice moving poem, but so sad! 
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you for the comment
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Morpheus1035 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can definitely relate to this...
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jackofalltrades0097 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Out of the three poems you just submitted to Authors-Club, I think this one is definitely my favorite! 
Wonderful job!  I can't wait to see more of your poems in the future! 
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
thank you, it really means a lot.
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QuietTurtle Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very very good.
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Writer
thank you
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